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The music was done especially well; well chosen sond, at the right volume, blended well, wasn't distracting. Perfect! Hehe... used Limewire to download it... Nice song.
Anyway. Despite the concept being FFARRR from original, you managed to make yours stand out.
Just, maybe a bit more variety next time, like some that are cracked, so when you shoot them, they split. Some that just drift above, so you can't shoot them away, but they get in the way. You know, to add a little spice to it.
Other then that, epic!
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You should make a toon supporting anarchism, just to see if every agrees with you, or something along those lines.
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Now I want popcorn....
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A decent attempt: +2
Bad animation: -3
Acceptable voice act: +2
A couple of ok jokes: +2
many horrible 'jokes':-2
bad narrative techniques (text slides (NEVER USE!)):-4
result: -3, aka 0/10, 0/5.
sorry mate, didn't make the cut.
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thanks for the review anyway, it will help towards my report
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Funny stuff, but not quite worth the ten.
Also, for anyone that doesn't know; we sell the bilby to raise funds for taking care of the bilibies, which ended up with an estimated wild population of 0, and only about fifty in captivity (not sure on the real numbers, these are from memory), so we raise funs to keep them from getting ass raped but things in the wild.
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It was crap;
Work on the animation's movements, all it was was some cuts, and sprites sliding across the floor.
Also, in a proper animation, only use aberrations where it would be appropriate (i.e. characters the use a lot of slang, in a humorous way ect)
Also, NEVER EVER say that it is your first animation, you say that, and you're already blamed. Be confident!
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While it was good, you're straying too much on to the story side of things, we are only happy so long as the blood flows.
Sorry, I just thought it was a bit too slow, and didn't have the feel of the older ones (The mindless slaughter we all love!)
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It was pretty good, just the shading (or there lack of) kind of messed it up a bit.
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That was weird... BUT AWESOME!
What more can I say really?
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That was epic! This simply has to become a full length movie!
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